The soft rain pelted Yamada like nails falling on his skin,his Kusari gama(its a scyth with a short hilt and has a long iro chain conected to it with a wieght at the end) was driping the blood of the fallen samurai at his feet. The bambo grove around him was in a state of silence ,the silence of death. He stood up and looted the boody of the young samurai, while he was looting the body he found that he had been converted to christ seeing as how he had a cross around his neck. He payed his respects and left. The young samurai was wise to lead him into the grove were the samurai had taken advantion to the Kusari-gama master weakness of needing large areas to swing his chain and entangel his oppentet, while at a tactical loss he still had far more skill at combat while the young samurai lacked the needed skill to do any amount of dammage to the master , the fool had come to close with every clumsy swing,with every opening in his attack,and with every unbalenced step he fell like a fool, he was stripped of his power. For Yamada had entangled the young mans sword and threw it from the boy's sweaty fingers, the fool not knowing when to stop went into a pitiful rage of bloodlust, he removed the smaller of the daisho(means large and small reffering to the main sword and the wakizashi/tanto) the wakizashi and his left arm fell to the floor in 1 frail swoop. Once realizing he had lost he preformed hara-kiri (;, "cutting the belly"), right before this moment he askedd yamada for writing utensells for his death poem not being able to read and write him self despite the fact he was of samurai desent,he denied the samurai of 1 last wish shaming the samurai worse and then despite his loyalty to christ he commited the ritual suicid. Yamada was 3 miles south east from osaka were his brother and pupil were making there landing on the docks. He would be impressed if they had become more evil like him. Yamada was a man united by hatered and it showed everywhere in his actions in his apperance. He was know to be the man with white hair and and his left pupl took the form of a cross with his red eye. He was known as the shaningami.

poor samurai cut down in the prime of life with some wepon that makes no sense and then looted lol (it was good)

great start sounds very good you could go some where with that my friend, and sasuke uses the same weapon in one of the anime episodes one of the early episodes. very good discriptive work should of said more of the area and surroundings even the weather to give the emotion of the situation. such as "the sky filled with gloomyness as another victim fell to blood lusting looter" or somethign like that

ty man its the first story i made i was gonna addd allout more but im a lil lazy lol

yerr you shoulds seems to be comign along pretty well , will you please have a look at mine titled Above A Though. need to decide weather i should continue it to further on.

The sky was fighting its way through the clouds,Masamune checked the supplies and there exploding caskets,and made sure he had enough arrows for his bamboo yumi (longbow),this was a nessesity to be safe if they were attacked by pirates,yamada was supposed to be waiting for him at the dock the . He was finnaly in japan if any pirates attack the ship it would be a long time till they reached the docks ,but he felt confident ,muko the assain was with them the pirates would not could not win. The salty air was calming,... BOOM!!! The shot hit the boat on the starboard side, they were gaining water fast,Masamune knew that the pirates would come yet still he could not move from the shock,he stood there confused and looking parayliyzed. An arrow nearly missed his head. Everything went blank then out of his inner fear came the strenth of his inner bloodlust, he grabbed an arrow and pulled back with all his power aming at a man on the other boat he let go the arrow moved with a qiuckness and shot the man in the eye, blood sprayed and the man let out a deafining scream, and was silenced by the next arrow to his throat. The death toll raised on both sides of the conflict, muko fell with a teppo(rifle) blast mutilating his face and neck, Masamune was utterly shocked and bewildered. Then came the wave of fear it swept his body in fleet of anger and fear, if they had this fire power he fell to the ground in fear, they drifted closer to shore but they wouldnt make it,his last hope he went to they lower deck and found the helpless crew men all pointing weapons at him obiviosly they thought he was 1 of the invaders they lowered there weapons when they rembered him as 1 of the crew he saw 1 was smoking a long pipe he asked for the flame,the man went to another room but shook his headthe room were his flint was wet ultimatleyit was useless,Masamune not being able to think of another way to win took the mans lit pipe with and a exploding caskets he ran up to the main deck and began lighting the casket with the pipe they were going to win nothing would stop him ....,he felt seiring pain hit his side as a arrow punctured his flesh with the pain he dropped the pipe into the water and fell to the floor in a fit of hot pain. They had lost, nothing was going to stop the pirates, they drifted closer and he saw the docks were yamada was waiting in a small boat, then out of his eye site he almost didnt catch the movement it was so subtel but it was still there, a chain was chocking a pirate his commradeds didn't noticeas as the man fell , the next mans suffered the same fate after 3 men died of this , yamada aperead cutting with swiftness the men on the boat had no chance a red mist engulfed the boat . He heard screams of terror as there commrads blood added to the mist of red . When it was done yamda stood laughing covered in blood with a silver glint in his eye the eye of a shaningami(death god).

i like so far

are these two texts supposed to be together or are they both form different ideas?

there chapter 1 and chapter 2

orr cool helps me ubnderstand it alittle more now

i edited my first 1 to help allout

chapter 3 Yamadas face was in an evil lunatict grin, then as sunndenly as it had apperead it was washed away with a disturbed look ,as though he had been gut like a fish. The bodys around his feet shared the same look but theres was horror of only the demon can cause. Masamune had a supprised look on his face then desened into darkness.He swung on a roap and landed on the defenders ship. "Pitiful" said yamada cruely "how is this my brother " he spat at the young mans feet obviuslty disappoined at his brothers weakness. For punishment he grabbed his incapacitated brotthers left hand and severed his pinki with one harsh look. the blood comeing from his brothers pinki was satisfing for a moment. Then he ripped apart of his cloack off and covered the wound. Yamada searched the boat for muko but could not see his familare face amoung the dead his search went way into 15 mins then recognized the curved sword, he looked at the man his face was muatalated. He looted his pupils body took all his silver and left the man was not even worthy of respects. Just then he saw a movement on the piratet ship he swung the roap again and landed on starboard side. Yamada look around the dead ship for any signs indcating life. There was a small movement and he walked to the place were he had seen it, it was a woman servent for the piratets trying to esacape the demon , he was close to stabing her but he heard a roar of anger and a loud "STOP" both people turned n the spot to were the voice came from, it was Masamun, "we may need her for the clan I know u sense she fits the reqiurments ,plus mukos dead". Yamada thought on this for a moment and hit her on the neck and she fell to the ground he picked her up and dumped her on the boat he used to get to the pirate ship, and jumped to the other side on the roap and picked up his brother and swung back and they boarded yamadas boat. "How many people do you intend to bring Masamune" said Yamada annoyed. "As much as it takes to reborn the clan" he said happily. "Then prepar for an army" Yamada said angerly. There was a pause and Masamune broke the silence "Thanks for the help" he said, "Fool do not think it was for affaction its onl;y because you are a tool in my plan i have no use for you are utterly expandeble it is only because uyou have are clans blood that i keep you here if not i would have killed you years ago" he said harshly.... tell me wut u think tell me wut u would like to hear next ,or if i should stop the storys.. ty

this starting to really get along now you should keep it up (Y)

thank you